Its not bad, although its up to you how to put together a song, i would suggest making a heavier beat after your rise. Its usually good to build up tension and then release it with a heavy sound, but since this was mostly a test for the riser you cant really complain. Btw, if you did this in FL Studio its really easy to do a riser with the built in generators. All you need to do is use the glide tool. Keep working at it, the song otherwise is quite concrete, the only other thing i would suggest is adding variations to drum beats. :)